Niceee
Thought you deserved a review^^
Like the loop alot. You should really make a song using this. Even though it might be hard, it have the "RUN, DANGER, SHOOP DA WHOOP(lol)" what not feel to it, and I kinda see how the song could go.
Consider it.
Oh btw, Was wondering why you say that its your shortest work, when its your only? =_O
Keep it up.